It took me 20 hours to finish the editing...

I think it's nice:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jes7frhXa5w

(11-29-2010 03:23 AM)EddieBass Wrote:  It took me 20 hours to finish the editing...

I think it's nice:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jes7frhXa5w

Im going to be honest it was a good cover but it could be better.

Most noticeable thing for me was that your not letting the notes ring out long enough.

2nd is your timing, Although not noticeable to the untrained ear. Its ever so slightly off at times.

Other than that very good cover.

To be completely honest if you add more bottom end to your tone and let the notes rings more youd have it spot on.

(11-29-2010 12:49 PM)pinkfloydfan1 Wrote:  

(11-29-2010 03:23 AM)EddieBass Wrote:  It took me 20 hours to finish the editing...

I think it's nice:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jes7frhXa5w

Im going to be honest it was a good cover but it could be better.

Most noticeable thing for me was that your not letting the notes ring out long enough.

2nd is your timing, Although not noticeable to the untrained ear. Its ever so slightly off at times.

Other than that very good cover.

To be completely honest if you add more bottom end to your tone and let the notes rings more youd have it spot on.

First of all I'd like to thank you very much for the feedback !
It really helps a lot.
I might watch to it.
But tell me, when do you think I must keep strings going for more time?
The guitar solo part?

Thank you once again !

In general its basically, Its in the technique of your playing, because your using your fingers the attack isnt quite there.
Which is causing a cut on the sustain, In order to get it sounding smoothly over all you need to let the strings ring out for a couple of milliseconds more.

For the solo section. Hameron the second fret during the dum daa dee da dum riff (cant remember the notes from memory) but that is how roger played it on the album.

Thats the advice i would give you everything else is perfect.

(11-30-2010 10:22 AM)pinkfloydfan1 Wrote:  In general its basically, Its in the technique of your playing, because your using your fingers the attack isnt quite there.
Which is causing a cut on the sustain, In order to get it sounding smoothly over all you need to let the strings ring out for a couple of milliseconds more.

For the solo section. Hameron the second fret during the dum daa dee da dum riff (cant remember the notes from memory) but that is how roger played it on the album.

Thats the advice i would give you everything else is perfect.

I really appreciate your review !

I checked it out and it would help if used a pick instead of fingers. But I really don't like picks. =(

Thank you very much for that !

I'm working on a new one, and this one will take me too much time...

I liked it, man, and I think the video was very cool! Keep working at it!

I've been playing PF stuff on my 12-string acoustic for almost 30 years, and the only song I've perfected is "Is There Anybody Out There?", although I think I do pretty good versions of Mother, Brain Damage, and On The Turning Away. (In fact, when I play solo gigs, I do a whole set of PF.) I would love to sit in with you sometime and jam.

I bet you do a pretty kick-ass rendition of On The Turning Away. It sounds simple enough, but I would bet it's rather hard to play or master. I wish I had the technical or musical ability to play an instrument -- the first thing I'd learn is Us and Them on the piano.

(12-04-2010 12:58 PM)PaulM Wrote:  I liked it, man, and I think the video was very cool! Keep working at it!

I've been playing PF stuff on my 12-string acoustic for almost 30 years, and the only song I've perfected is "Is There Anybody Out There?", although I think I do pretty good versions of Mother, Brain Damage, and On The Turning Away. (In fact, when I play solo gigs, I do a whole set of PF.) I would love to sit in with you sometime and jam.

Hi Paul.

First of all, thank you very much for your kind words ! =)
About playing together, well, who know?
Technology has come to help us out ! =)
Do you play Fearless? Do you have a way to record it? Nice camera, etc?

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(12-09-2010 08:08 AM)Lady Floydian Wrote:  I bet you do a pretty kick-ass rendition of On The Turning Away. It sounds simple enough, but I would bet it's rather hard to play or master. I wish I had the technical or musical ability to play an instrument -- the first thing I'd learn is Us and Them on the piano.

hehehe, yeah, that piano is perfect. But if I could choose a song to play on piano first, I'd like to play The Great Gig In the Sky ! \o/

About On the Turning Away, I think the bass doesn't appear too much in this song. It's better for a guitar cover.
I will work hard on "Murder", which is a song I really love. But I gotta buy myself a fretless bass guitar. =)

Thank you ! Greets from Brazil !

Nice.

Good job! But like the others have said, your timing is ever so slightly off at times and you arn't holding the sustain. But other wise it great!
Keep up za good work...